yer psychotic...which explains why yer my friend...

you know I love this story. I mean, really.

I like your writing style, and you did a very good job giving each character their own personality in such a small piece. I'm not sure that i liked the ending or not. At first I hated it, but after i thought about it, i realized that it was actually pretty good. I'm still thinking about it though.

Wowza, I see why you got a good grade on this. :) You should submit this to a short story magazine.

Hey. I feel really bad about the review. I was getting a little flame-happy, and I'm afraid you ended up taking the brunt of it. Anyway, this is a good story! Rather a surprise at the end. Are you going to continue it?

hehehe, difinately an A worthy essay! Nice! But the ending was a little sad...