Wow, very… interesting to put it plainly. This is very well done. I’d like to invite you to a writing forum. I hope you enjoy the community and share some of your interesting works.
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your skill with words is superb. I'm so curious now!

Mew! You could either end it here, or keep going *cough* write more! *cough* hehe, hopefully you will continue this, I've enjoyed reading it so much. The characters all came to life and it was such a different twist on the normal vampire romance story ^.~

The descriptions are absoutly amazing, its like I'm right along side with all the characters. Love this ^.~

Ohh cliffhanger ending ^.~ Thankfully I have a pretty much free period to finish reading! *confetti*

Very well written. I'm really eager for more. Though this site is filled with vampires, you've found a way to escape the cliches. Good job.

Om my gosh, this is SO good! You are one incredibly talented person. ^_~ Are you going to add more chapters?! Please do!