This has got to be my favorite poem of all that I've read on the site. You have a great vocabulary and write at an amazing skill level. loved it

I also love this! Very innovative how you used capitilization.Brilliant.

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I like this, a lot. What a wonderful surprise; I had a feeling it was something natural (for a bit I was thinking "cat").
"Fatally delicious," that is just a completely beautiful image.

Very good twist at the end there, I didn't expect that ^_^ Really nice flow from "She curses" to the end, I couldn't really pick it up untill then. Whoever said it was good was right :D And definately not disappointing

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