interesting... very interesting... too bad you didn't write anything like this in Algebra 2 this year- we could have had fun writing it together!

I enjoyed the twisted humour and dark yet satisfying ending.
A unique piece of story telling, captivating from the very start. :]

MWAHAHA! Stupid mortals! Great job.

Nice! Well-written. But why did they start 'rising' when she pounced on the girl? I don't know, that part just didn't seem clear.
Also, I've always wondered--how do people in stories on fictionpress always seem to notice others' eye color, even at night, even in high-stress situations? I don't notice people's eye color. I've had friends for years and years of whose eye color I haven't the slightest clue. *shrug* Just a thought.

Hm, pretty good. Writing during Geometry huh? I know what you mean. ^_~ I write through all my classes LoL... I wonder what my Government grade is? O__o LoL...
Later,
~Raven~
*esther*