This is a sweet story, would like to see how there relationship grows. Are you going to continue? Want to know who her dad is, hope there not related. Please update

I like this story, it's original. Please update soon :). I promise i'll R&R if you do *hopeful* - will bribery work?

This is a very good story, please update!

Really good. I can see you have not updated in a long time. Well I hope you do not give up on this story, it is very good and creative.

This is cool! I really like your story and I hope you continue to post!

Great story, please continue

This is a beautiful, touching story. These characters are very young, but also very real and sweet. My favorite part is the innocence of their friendship-how race doesn't factor for them, how it transcends their circumstances. I noticed that you don't accept anonymous reviews, and while that is understandable, you might get more reviews if you open them up to everyone. There are many people who don't hold accounts with or who would probably love to leave their comments. Do you plan on continuing this story? I'm hooked!