LOVELY LOVELY LOVELY. I'm sorry its over. the only thing was that you coulda built up shawns reaction a bit more. but other than that! next story girl. you're definitely on a roll! Lisa

I'm back and reviewing. Don't think I've forgotten about you. I'm loving this story and sorry I haven't been here pumping you up. I just started getting back into fp and even writing my stories! So here's my cheerleading support. As always your writing is clear and straightforwards and i love it. Lisa

hey, i really really loved your writing. the style is just amazingly perfect and comprehensible.. i'm really impressed though there was something i felt wasn't enough.. u know the part where halley finds out the truth? i sort of didn't get the feeling out of it.. i don't know, maybe that chapt in shawn's POV would have worked better.. cuz i still had the idea that halley was the victim even after the explanation.. but other than that.. cool stuff! )

Did I mention that I like your writing? First, I like your descriptions. I like how one feels like they truley understand her even if they don't and I think that you give enough scenery type ones to move the story along smoothly. Your characters are believable which is hard and I think that your diction puts you in a class above most. So, great story!

ok, I just wanna say that this story ROCKED! It's been awhile since I've been so anxious to read a story:) It's been my dream to be a cowgirl, knowing everything about country life and being able to ride a horse like a pro. I guess I could relate to this story in a way. It was just classic and I loved it! I hope to see more stories like this from u:)

BRAVO, applause, applause

hi! i just loved that! u have great talent. at first i thought it might seem like Sweet Home Alabama but it wasn't and i liked how u used ur knowledge bout stuff to make the story interesting. it really was great and i can't wait to read future stuff!

Wonderful, absolutely wonderful. Nice epilogue. Can't wait to read your other stories. Congrats and great job with this fic.

love it
great story

It's Ti.. *tear* its over. email me when you start a new one! i still need to read all of ur other stories.. i read Love Is Blind.. O yeah, and i need to read those stories that you recommended to me. Tell me when you start your new one. And could you please review my poem? thanx...
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-

hooray hooray! Great job! hope to see more of you soon!
liriel

Yay! Perfect! I can't wait for the next chapter :-)

lovely... absolutely lovely

Im very very happy. i want to see them have kids. or like see her kid rideing a bull with a little neighbor boy watching or something. i loved the cousin part, nice touch! haha the happiness!
liriel

yay! i'ma happy! _ finally, finally! u scared me when shawn was huggin his cuz... so the next chapter's the epilogue? cant wait! UPDATE SOON!
-THE RANDOM CRITIC-