I cried , I screamed at the feeling the emotion within this. Just brillant and beautiful. A fitting tribute to our Lord. ^-^

~* Noelle O.O;V *~

nice tribute..,

Good job. I love the line
"sorrow and love entwined,
seeds of salvation for us sown."
So true, and put in such a lyrically beautiful way.

For so many years I've asked God to give me a real ... taste, touch, sensory perception of Him. You know what He answered? Go back to the Gospels. Jesus is truly the visible of the invisible... To grasp Him is to grasp God... How I wish I could get there... The poem truly brings forth the thought of His deeds. We can write over and over and over of Him and never really grasp the enormity of His sacrifice... but that shouldn't stop us from writing about it ;-) well done

wonderful piece; your christian works are always so well-written and touching. awesome!

Simply amazing... His life, and even more so, His death was so profound. So much rich imagery running through this... embodiment of that pain He experienced. I can't say enough about this piece. Truly astounding. I'm constantly reminded by your poetry why I have you on my favs list!

Your faith is so incredibly strong, it amazes me each time. I wasn't born into a certain religion, but now I wish I was...

Took my breath away. I don't have your God given talent, but I do share your words. It's nice to find someone with the same pure outward faith- it's refreshing. Your words capture the amazing essence of Jesus; and I find myself wanting to read all of your work. Keep your spirit strong, never stop listening to God. Your words will not go unheard.
"But none of these things move me, neither count I my life dear unto myself, so that I might finish my course with joy, and the ministry, which I have received of the Lord Jesus, to testify the gospel of the grace of God." Acts 20:24
"So shall my word be that goeth forth out of my mouth: it shall not return unto me void, but it shall accomplish that which I please, and it shall prosper in the things whereto I sent it." Isaiah 55:11

Beautiful... Everything in this poem is true! Write more!

Even though I'm not religious, your poem stirred me.
it's great, both the poem and the fact that you are so loyal to your beliefs

Amen. Thanks for posting this.
~Heart of the Sword

Very true.
John 3:16