oh. the emotion in this blows me away. i would bold & italicize & underline as many complimentary adjectives as i could if fpress would let me, but i suppose a -sque- will have to suffice.

this was written on my birthday a year ago. coincidence, non? =)

cheers-- lin

very strong emotion. Hey, your LDS! awesome- so am i.

I know exactly how you feel. Nice poem; strong and sad. Beautiful imagery too.

Beautiful and sad..
sums up the way I felt a few years ago..
Beautiful..

What a beautiful poem. Very sad and haunting, but full of emotion which made this poem all the more great. Wonderful work yet again :)
*cosmo-queen*

well, it may not be your usual style, but you should do it more often ~ it's bloody brilliant. it sweeps you away like a dark river at night - you're not sure whether you're awake or dreaming ~ *such* a neat feeling. awesome use of repetition with the I have/feel sentence structure, it made the poem more powerful both sound-wise and in terms of impact. excellent work.

I almost cried at the last line! But maybe that's because I'm tired and cross-eyed, :-).
Another excellent poem! It was definately different, but it was still wonderful to read. Great work!

Very good poem. I really like the general idea of it. Keep up the good work!

I am amazed yet again. Your style is so mature for your age. I couldn't write like that. I love the format too!
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AC

This is so moving. I can almost taste the pain in my own heart; I've felt that terror before. You capture that "broken" feeling so well, how can anyone deny it's a "good poem"?

so powerful and emotional...i feel the same way, just no one knows...
=summerdazed=

Loved it! That was an awesome poem. Very personal and very powerful.
Good work.

The contradictions you showed reflect how our emotions can never be filtered into one single idea. I've been like this a lot lately. I feel things, but they have no origins, and it seems like they are misplaced. However, they are still there. Does that make sense?
~Heart of the Sword

man, Anjeni, this poem is powerful and emotional. Awesome work! Its not your normal style but it fits your work all the same.
On a different note, Have a safe and fun Christmas!

It seems kind of like a story in its own way. It's definitely descriptive and powerful... Awesome job.
~Lidless Eye