Am I to be rendered speechless by every poem of yours I read?? Another amazing work! Circles and triangles... I love it.

wonderful piece. well written, another dark one, nicely angsty, i like this a lot. awesome diction, imagery, and emotions conveyed. good rhyming as well, it works well in the poem. i love the end, the last line reminds me of these lines from evanescence's my immortal, "these wounds won't seem to heal/ this pain is just too real/ there's just too much that time cannot erase." anyway, great job on this. keep writing.

Circles and triangles, what an interesting and unique analogy. Love it, perfectly fitting and distinguishing. And "impuissance"--what a word! Lovely. I like this. Every line seems very drenched in poetic meaning which I could dissect for you if I was not feeling so very unphilosophical at the moment. But I'm reading you poetry again at any rate, so I guess that's something?
~lyv
(why haven't I been caught up?...blah)

And for yet another time, i stand in awe and speechless from your work. You use such powerful words and so eloquently. You work really cuts straight to the heart. I am so amazed I don't know what else to say. Incredible job, keep it up!

No disrespect, but you seem to get better with each and every single piece you write. It really is amazing to read your work.
~Heart of the Sword

Man was this good...It's like you can sing an invisible and unheard tune when reading this O_o great poem like the theme too