ok, you must be dillusional if you think it was worth the effort it took to write that piece of shit. How do you get from '[screamifyoucan]' to romance and back to screams again? If you're going to write poetry make sure that you can pull it off before you subject the world to it!

Illigitimate Luv Child

Beautifully written. You have great talent!

... I cry everytime I read this. You know why. This is my favorite of yours, sweet Norah. Dark, gorgeous, and perfect.
Everything he is.

Interesting. Nicely done.

wow... the imagery of it all.. lovely poem, keep writing _