Cool. That was awesome. And now it's very late indeed. *scurries away to go to sleep*

Intense. Great, but intense! :-)

Though I think it could benefit from some stuff about the conviction of sin and repentance, as well as an appreciation of what Jesus did in dying for us and saving us from Hell - i.e. not only a "trust Jesus and life will be easier" kinda message. Perhaps Wil could understand that he is sinful just like Richard, but God forgives him...

I was right, Ryan's bad news. Hmm - whatever it was you did to indicate that in the earlier chapters, I picked it up... :-)

One other thing - Andy's not her old self right now either. She's too self-occupied.

Hrmph. I don't like Ryan, and Wil is making me nervous. He's too quiet, not his normal self, and that snide comment with Bruce has me worried...

This story really is a lot darker than the first...

Hmm... Vicki's "grown up" quite quickly here. Similarly, Cora's suddenly incredibly different to how she was in the previous book - sure she's been through a lot in the past that the reader hasn't seen, but her behaviour is perhaps just a little too extreme right now... *shrugs* I dunno, just some thoughts...

:-o

Wow. Erm... this is most certainly a very different story to the first book. I've had my hand over my mouth for the last few chapters. You've done an excellent job of catapulting the reader into the horror and tension of the storyline.

i am so mad right now. you wanna know why? Cuz you only have three reviews. this story is really really really good. I would say that you have 'inspired' me but then, that sounds really cheesy. I would list bout ten compliments, but then I would be unoriginal. So I am just leaving it at "This is a great fic!" and then pound some sense into your brain so you'll write more.

Write on!

I really like this series! You really showed their emotions and detailed it, but not overly. Great job!

wow! this story is very beautiful.. i love the way God is a big part of this story.. WOW! i think you're very talented, and i love you wonderful stories =)! good luck with your writing!

da end? no! i wana kno wha happens next! o plz write another chapter or start another story plz plz!! r wil and viki gona get 2gether now dat wil is a christian? maybe? lol o plz write some more!