thanks for the awesome comment. i like your work very much too your haikus are wonderful. this one is especially great i love the title and how it ties into the haiku.

ah...I love the indirect description of the traditional poison-green color...Morbid, but beautiful this one was.

That was really wordy, but I liked it...one of the most complex haikus I have read. Good Job! ^_^

You like the theme of being drugged up medicinally, don't you? Heh, Alice. Well, one must feel pain not to. Anyway. Your haikus are wonderful, as per usual, not to give you a status of ordinary.

Frugale...what do I even say? I think you've put all of us to shame. Awesome, Amazing, Artistic, all of the above. Coma foliage has to be the best 5 syllable line ever...followed closely by jaded infusion. And I love the word serenade. And it's an allegory for the condition of life, not just a pretty poem...*swoons*
~lyv

oh, very creepy in a subtle, metaphorical way. it's amazing what an incredible effect you've created with so few words. awesome lil' piece. and merry christmas! :)

I'm beginning to like your works a lot. They have such deep meanings and an excellent choice of words. Great job!

Each word of this was so sheerly awesome.
~Heart of the Sword

** cool. Every single word is full of meaning and unique.

"Coma foilage." Awesome figurative language. "Poison ivy serenades." Brilliant!
-Jessica