I luv this! its great, because its such an abstract way of description! beautiful!~TRW

Wow, really good! Got told to check out your stuff by John (SeekeroftheWay) and I'm so glad I did, cuz its incredible!

mm, it was beautiful. angry. i liked it. sends shivers down your spine. the rhymes were a little boring though. the aa thing madde it dull, like reading a nursery rhyme. if you'd varied them a little i think it would be beter. still, great poem.

::cuddles:: I think you needed that. ::hugs:: New pjs? meet . . . the floor! - MWA-HAHAHA!
::warm embrace:: at least yours have colour ::reaching for you:: I have the meanest sister in the world, I think she is actually jealous of my IM friends, she is the ** du Vrai Moi, stupid sister, Why must she keep finding ways for me to LOATHE her? ::pots:: "I think I need a hug." ::thinks:: I think crying babies are annoying, even if they are my broter's kid AND she has acid reflux, I STILL hate that grating sound which comes along with my sister's bitchy repeated remark "Why don't you love Caroline?" ::raises an eye brow:: I am sad u 1/2 knot reviewed our fused mused poem yet ::cuddles:: but you are forgiven - he says with a malicious smirk

I love your descriptions. It makes you view the holidays in a different way..

::smiles:: Not only is this a wonderful poem, nice surprise to MYSELF at the end. ::laughs:: I love Jade, and much to my surprise, he was COMPLETELY dry...and plus, he's not wearing any underwear...::scratches head:: Now how could I have missed that...?
Great poem. Angsty in some parts, but nevertheless beautiful. ^_^

Hey hun. ;) Love the poem.
::Choking myself to death on cream flavoured foam:: I love it. :):) So many picatures in it...its wonderful. :)