Wow, this was amazing! It was so non-detailed that you could actually make up what it was, but in the same way, we knew what was going on! Great job.

This is a really intense story and very strait to the point. This work is really unique and I had no idea that the story would end the way it did. This is the first one shot I’ve read so I hope the others can live up to this one.

oh wow...

i love this story. it's dark and sad but magical in a way at the end of it. nice!

oh.
I love it.
Nicely morbid and sensual in a dark way. I think the only thing you did wrong was not describe the oral sex in detail. XD *slaps herself* ow. XX dont ask. Tokie's in a mood she shouldnt be... ok I dont know, whatever.
Great story.

It is very nice, love. Sad too...its like it came from experience almost. I certainly pray not however, I wouldn't stand for anything like that to happen to my love. I love it, its moving. -Nods- Its unique too.. yes.
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