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End Of The Innocence 2003-12-24 . chapter 1
You should probably get rid of the parenthesis in the middle of the poem, and the "...'s" are distracting...but a great idea. Keep writing.
*Briley-Sama*
Escapist 2003-12-24 . chapter 1
Such a true analogy.
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