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Reviews For: The Perfect Place

Needa S
2005-04-23
ch 1,
abuseWow... Blessed this is awesome. Keep'em coming. God Bless!

Needa S.
white-clouds
2005-01-01
ch 1,
abuseI felt peaceful reading this. Nice job;)
Blessed Sacrament
2004-10-13
ch 1,
abuseI really must say, very nicely written. It does almost bring a tear to your eye. That movie was amazing... Keep up the good work.
Scarlett Red Rose
2004-01-05
ch 1,
abuseWow... I get an amazing feeling of peace from reading this poem. Keep up the great talent! Happy Writing! ~SRR~
Keep it 100
2003-12-24
ch 1,
abuseYou wrote this so well. The setting you created was very impressive.
~Heart of the Sword
Magentian
2003-12-24
ch 1,
abuseMan! I'm sad now. I'm not sure what the point of it was, or even where a place exists (within a 100 mi or so) that this could be taking place. And just when I thought it would be getting good ("I will be free for a moment/If only a moment/While in the midst of all the beauty/I become a part of it"), it lapsed into blandness again. I guess this is just what happens when you try to describe an emotion so powerful it defies words.
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