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| Needa S 2005-04-23 ch 1, | abuseWow... Blessed this is awesome. Keep'em coming. God Bless! Needa S. |
| white-clouds 2005-01-01 ch 1, | abuseI felt peaceful reading this. Nice job;) |
| Blessed Sacrament 2004-10-13 ch 1, | abuseI really must say, very nicely written. It does almost bring a tear to your eye. That movie was amazing... Keep up the good work. |
| Scarlett Red Rose 2004-01-05 ch 1, | abuseWow... I get an amazing feeling of peace from reading this poem. Keep up the great talent! Happy Writing! ~SRR~ |
| Keep it 100 2003-12-24 ch 1, | abuseYou wrote this so well. The setting you created was very impressive. ~Heart of the Sword |
| Magentian 2003-12-24 ch 1, | abuseMan! I'm sad now. I'm not sure what the point of it was, or even where a place exists (within a 100 mi or so) that this could be taking place. And just when I thought it would be getting good ("I will be free for a moment/If only a moment/While in the midst of all the beauty/I become a part of it"), it lapsed into blandness again. I guess this is just what happens when you try to describe an emotion so powerful it defies words. |