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End Of The Innocence 2003-12-24 . chapter 1
My only suggestion would be to please take out the "Dunno." You have intelligence and know English...so you can write "I don't know," or "I shudder to think," or something of that nature. Lol. Other than that, interesting...(STILL LOVE THE CHRISTMAS TREE ONE!)
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