 Paradoxical Shadows 2005-11-28 . chapter 1Absolutely beautiful? No, I can't describe in words how great and moving this poem was. It was nice in length and yet you pulled together the rhyming so perfectly. You almost brought me to tears. Wonderful job! |
 foxhiei ff.net name 2004-07-31 . chapter 1 beautiful and sad |
 damsel of dragons 2004-05-18 . chapter 1wow, that almost made me cry, I felt the tears in my eyes. very moving. |
 monkey-fairy 2004-03-10 . chapter 1 omg..this poem almost made me cry! I love it so much! its really awesome...great writing...its also very touching |
 Kingpin 2004-02-01 . chapter 1Man I really should pay more attention. I had no idea this was here. ...That came in a dream huh? Powerful dream. I like dreams. I like seeing and making dreams come true, and I like dreams that inspire poetry as well. At least, your poetry. Heheh... OK I'll be quiet now. |
 Eika 2003-12-25 . chapter 1I can believe that it happened. It's so real, that it seems too perfect to be written down. There's no proof, yet, in my heart, I can say that it's true. It's so sad, the story. The girl with cancer; makes me want to cry. Yet I can also sense the happiness in it. And the sense of being set free. |