Reviews for Nausea Likes Slippers

Reviews For: Nausea Likes Slippers

Dani 2007-08-03 ch 1, anon.	abuseHm, it doesn't seem to flow quite as well as "On the Roof Again", and as your more recent writing style I've gotten used to. Perhaps it's overuse of adjectives and adverbs, I'm not entirely sure. In any case, I did like it... hooray for cute!
Instant-Soup 2007-07-15 ch 1,	abusegot to love the fluff =] x
underjoyed 2004-11-01 ch 1,	abuseI like these two, they're really cute. And the little bit you wrote at the end about your inspiration was really cool. I wish that'd happen to me more often. Anyway, like somebody else said, I never though throwing up would be cute, but it IS in this context. And I love the amount of detail in this, it's a lovely little insight into a semi-normal event (okay, I'm not sure how normal throwing up on slippers is, but you get what I mean), but it's done so well, so it's not mundane or boring at all.
Jeoal 2004-01-19 ch 1,	abuseThe best stories always do seem to be the impulse, "on a whim" ones--the ones that speak to you in a random scene-- don't they? And this one is no exception to that. :-) ... Miguel and Lee are a great couple, besides. I wouldn't mind seeing more of them--not at all. :-) ... Do keep writing! You are a wonderful author.
Qam 2004-01-16 ch 1,	abuseI never imagined I could think wretching would be so "cute" :-P For a sequel, I think Miguel should get sick and 'slaughter in an undignifying manner' something of Lee's. (No, I'm only kidding, of course) - All of that aside, this was a wonderful story- it was imaginative, interesting, and very well-written, if I may add. And it had a nice moral, too..."only for love should you allow your slippers to be slaughtered in such an undignified manner" ...er, more or less. (And I believe I just slaughtered your quote.) - Yes, so, bottom line, keep up the fantastic work.
Vali 2004-01-03 ch 1,	abuseCute and funny. That's it, that's all the comment you get, not because you don't deserve more but because I totally suck at reviews. I just wanted to let you know I read this and liked it. I'm actually in the perfect mood to read your stuff since it's too damn hot! I hate summer!
Lainey 2003-12-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseThat was the cutest thing I've read all break! I was almost worried my parents would come in to check I me; I was giggling so hard. Next time be nicer to the slippers Emy dear ^^;
Jenny 2003-12-29 ch 1, anon.	abuseI could eat all this fluff with a spoon. ^.^ I love fluff. This was v. lovely.
Amania 2003-12-25 ch 1, anon.	abusePretty story...
Razorblade 2003-12-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseLovely story, Lira-doll. Lovely.

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