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| phooey 2004-05-21 ch 1,  | abusePretty descriptions, though many of them are rather familiar. It seems a little vague. Many people think that vagueness gives a piece poetry, and so it does, but it also takes away sincerity. |
| the mighty lu bu 2004-04-02 ch 1, | abuseThanks for your review. I've always felt strongly that the israelites were not being treated farely by the UN. What the palestinian's have been doing to israel is no different than what the terrorist did to us in september 11th. If i blow a bus up that was filled with children than i would get the electic chair for sure. but when the palestinians blow a bus filled with children nothing is done. The fact is that it is murder no matter what race you are. Nothing justifys killing innocents. Besides i never heard of the israelies attacking palestinians like that. I cry JUSTICE FOR ISRAEL AND IT'S PEOPLE. once again thanks for your review. |
| the mouse that roared 2004-03-23 ch 1, | abuseHi, Just looking around and saw your name and I thought it was cool, so I decided to read some of your stuff. This is really good. I like it a lot. The description of Serenity and what it says about both of you is really good. I like the metaphors and imagery of the lake. Good job! |
| Psycho-kyugurl 2004-01-14 ch 1, | abuseThis is so sweet...it brought teras to my eyes...it's nice to know you have a place you can seek for solace and comfort in darker time of the day, it is always assuring to know that you'll always have a friend to be there when you're down. This is great, thank you for sharing with us all. |
| JupGrrl 2004-01-13 ch 1, | abuseI've read this already, and reading it again sent chills down my spine. You show so much maturity in your writing and such incredible use of imagery and wording. It's astounding. |
| Rose/MagenDavid 2004-01-02 ch 1, anon. | abuse*secret smile* Very good D very good... Fav lines: "They never saw her drawings, emotion and pain etched in charcoal, beauty etched in black. They never knew the songs in her head, the light in her eyes, the dark in her soul." |
| Talia Veila 2003-12-25 ch 1, | abuseWow... I love the words you used, I get a really vivid description. Great writing. And good luck on getting your novel published! If you just want to talk about writing, e-mail me. I'm always open for a chat. |