lovely poem.
Maybe more effective it was just a "little girl" or then again it's a bit to cliché. Love it.

helo.helo. i never had a stuffed animal... :(

nice... :)

hey this has a good idea in it..unique thats all i can say about it besides being sweet and nice..a peom about someone playing a guitar way nice :)

pretty good imagery. but you can do better.

Hey, great poem! I liked the way you wrote it, I also really liked the one line where you said; you are the stars lit up in the sky. Keep 'em coming!

Excellent poem; heartfelt and moving.

I rather enjoyed that poem. Thanks for sharing it and please keep on writing:)

a nice poem!
it's short, but i enjoyed it.
good work

nice poem

MM...a bit cliche, your imagery isn't original, but it works because you convey your emotions effectively, and isn't that the whole purpose of poetry? Very nice. I like.
*Clarie*

we all have that one special person
i think i like this piece because its
something that alot of people can
relate to
well done
and merry christmas
Live on the EdGe...

kudos to you for articulating what so many girls are afraid to reveal- i can relate to so many feelings you expressed in this poem, it's almost scary. very good work- keep it up!

That's very good, I like the way it's written! cheers!
*lyz