Hello, Flaed-chan! That was a really good poem! You write poetry very well (something i don't even TRY to do, most of the time...)!
*is listening to Evanescence's My Immortal* Man, that song is very fitting for Yami Bakura, if Ryou were to die, or something... *ponders this*
ANYway... It's a really great poem! ^_^_^_^
AND I FOUND CONCRETE, CANON, REASONS FOR DISLIKING TEA AND MAI THAT DON'T HAVE TO DO WITH THE FRIENDSHIP SPEECHES THAT TEA DOESN'T ACTUALLY GIVE! Talk to you on AIM! Bye!

How is it that I didn't see this when it was posted? Ah well. Now I'm reviewing from school. . .who knows what'll happen if this gets traced. . .
Well, as a hypocritical eupraxophist who celebrates Christmas with her family, I thought this was very nice! ^_^ "Beacons of purity in the dark night"--great line. I'm not really in a position to critique much more than the words. . .the meaning is sort of a closed door for me, though I hold it in respect. But, as usual, everything was vivid, colorful, and crystal clear. Great job.

this is what Christmas really should be about...I love the simplicity in your narrative...I love your imagery..this is going on my favorites list now...
in his love
Somnia