|Reviews for MURDER|
| Kucing 2/25/13 . chapter 1
| Talence86 4/1/06 . chapter 1
Awesome poem! I seriously got chills. Nice appeals.
| Phantoms-fallen-angel 11/29/05 . chapter 1
Hey, thanks for your review, I'm glad you liked my piece. Wow... this piece is very bold and sends a very strong message. I especially liked from "You were a sneaky little rat...to a liar who lies.." Very bold, and very cold. I especially appreciate the message behind this, it wasn'tmureder for the sake of murder, nor was it for love - it was for rivalry, and the emotional scars that neglect can leave. Keep up the great work. Cheers.
| Plinky 9/28/05 . chapter 1
I'm quite worried! Lots of death and scariness in your stuff! It's very good though! You captured the emotion really well in this poem, it was really well expressed! Keep writing!
| Noir Fleurir 9/14/05 . chapter 1
i love this. the last line was a little unexpected but i liked it a lot
| My Twisted Lullabye 3/18/05 . chapter 1
I absolutely love this poem! I know it's morbid, but hey, I like morbid things. It's cool that ur a christian too! :) I thought I was weird being a "morbid-enjoying" Christian, but yay! I'm not alone! Keep writing!
| SeventhBell Astarael 7/16/04 . chapter 1
thats really good i like it my poem looks like nothing compared to that its good :)
| RisingBeauty 5/30/04 . chapter 1
This sounds so spitefilled, yet so calm and collected. It depicts the thoughts of a crazy person perfectly. I love how the rhyming was natural, it didn't sound forced at all. I also loved the first four lines. They immidiately brought me into the feel of the poem. The overall atmosphere created by this poem was awesome, it was just such a cold hatred, that seemed so natural that it was scary. Nice work.
| miss darkening bruce 5/5/04 . chapter 1
hi! you revied one of my stories and i decided to read one of yours.
this is realy nice very well done you can almost taste the envy there, nice work .
| ash42 3/2/04 . chapter 1
hey i saw u read my poem and reviewed and i decided to read this one lol well anywho i can kinda picture this story lol makes me wanna write one right now lol *deep sigh* lol well anywho i will ttyl
| Wingless Fairy 1/29/04 . chapter 1
This was a tad bit disturbing, but very well written. Your rhyming was great, and you conveyed the story well. Thanks for reviewing my poem!
| Aryante 1/28/04 . chapter 1
*giggles* that's my kinda poem! it's very cute! i like it!
| Nathan Locke 1/24/04 . chapter 1
i love it! you do have a way with words.
| rocket baby doll 1/23/04 . chapter 1
m... a little dark? i like the way it flows though, and the rhyme.. it just seemed so natural..
Keep it up!
| fall3nang3l 1/19/04 . chapter 1
cool poem! i like it even if it's dark. there's such mystery and sunspense surrounding it. thanks for reviewing by the way! great job! keep on writing!