Wow.
Ha, that's great.

Lol, this was great. "It's a lack of blood to the brain type thing"- I loved that line. Well done on a well-written sonnet, they can be hard to write. Keep it up :)
*cosmo-queen*

lol!
i have read a few sonnets in me time...but none like this. i really liked it, my fav lines being "Why I love you, dear, no one really knows.
It's a lack of blood to the brain type thing."
welldone, this was good. kudos.

Excellent. Simply fantastic. The forth line is absolutely the best; you scared me a little at first, you know. The description makes me think of this one girl I would kill in a minute if I thought I could get away with it; only she's too deformed and moronic to ever be a whore. She was what inspired The Stabbing Song and its subsequent verses. God, I hate her! *represses undying hatred* But anyways, this is funny and evil, and all that good stuff. Ah, sonnets. They're so easy to write when you don't really have anything to say. This is going in my favorites.

heh. Reminds me of 10 Things I Hate About You. Well written, btw.

interesting, you should have continued on...writing all sorts of nasty stuff about that person *wicked grin*

wow...funny and well written. sonnets are fun to write
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