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Summerdazed
2004-04-22
ch 1,
abuseyou do like cats eh? this is nice! anyway, i checked your profile cuz of your pen-name werecat. i never knew there's something like a werecat until a few days ago when i come across it in a fiction. i thought maybe you're new cuz the book is new, only to find out that you're among the oldest memeber of the site! oh and I don't mean it in terms of age...*smile* nice to see someone lasting so long, a lot of them stopped halfway as they grow up. keep writing!
review me if you're free!
=summerdazed=
Open-Wood-Silence
2004-04-10
ch 1,
abuseo_O Amusing...in a -it's-not-happening-to-me way.
I like how you portrayed the cat's characters, even though the ending gave me a shock (though I should expect that kind of idea from a cat's point of view)
*claps* Good write!
Skye
Penny so Pretty
2004-02-19
ch 1,
abuseThis is very cute. How did you get a picture in your bio? Cuz I wish I knew how! Please review one of my pieces and tell me how you did that... Thanx in advance...
Uqaq :D
Loki Mischeif-Maker
2004-02-12
ch 1,
abuse*While laughing* Very cute. You have captured the feline personaltiy (or at least that of my next-door neighbor's) in this poem. Though, no matter what kind of pet you have, they never go well with the flu. . . .

Anyway, cool poem.
Cheers!
Bathmat
2004-02-11
ch 1,
abusehehe.
You wouldn’t suppose she’s going to die?
At last they relax and I hold them tight.
Well, if she dies, who gets the first bite?
The imagery is splendid and very very catlike. only one line doesn't seem to sit right to me... "Lugh thinks it’s cozy to sleep on my head." Although admittedly, there's nothing better that waking up, unable to breath, with a mouthful of cathair :)
Dirty Wallpaper
2004-01-26
ch 1,
abuseLOL!
*sigh* I *love* your cat works, they really are very entertaining. i loved this, its very comical, truthful, and well...i dunno, its just great :D.
well done! i thoroughly enjoyed :D
KUDOS!
light of middle earth
2004-01-06
ch 1,
abuseAve!
Sorry about the lateness of this review but i have been at home and lacking in internet time... I have a cat as well ;) Hmm a pagan, interesting.. Wicca? I have a lot of views on that... Not burn burn burn views but ones of deeper thought and i hope less prejudice, i looked into wicca once myself thats all... Sorry on to the poem! I like this as i often think my cat has much the same priorities on his mind and you work the role play in well, feasible reactions... I like this as a fellow cat lover,
McD
R. Blade
2004-01-02
ch 1,
abusehehe. i love cats! this was so cool.. the last part was my fave. by the way, how did u get the pic in ur info? i cant figure out how to do that. great poem!
~scars~
Shinn
2004-01-01
ch 1,
abuse*G* really, really cute poem. I loved it. :D
giygas666
2003-12-31
ch 1,
abuseIt's the return of the double poem format! You did a god job with this one. I'd like to see more of these.
Because I live with a cat, I know that cats are really focused on only a couple of things: eating and sleeping. And demanding that you clean the litter box lest they use the couch as a toilet. Alas, if only humans could be content with such a simple and easy life...oh well.
I hope you get better soon!
NewbiaTheElf
2003-12-31
ch 1,
abuseAmusing. Not laugh out loud funny, but made me smile. For a person who appears to have a lot of cats, you don't seem to like them much.
Cirien Phoenix
2003-12-29
ch 1,
abuseI think this is great because I had the flu and I have 3 cats. Amazing true to the cat personality!
Anyways, thanks for the review on chapter 2. I don't think I put author's notes in the story itself more than once the entire story. I'll be sure not to do that again. That's a very good suggestion, thank you!
~Cirien Phoenix of the Eternal Phlame
NeuroticGothicLolitaDeathDo...
2003-12-28
ch 1,
abuselol, cute... I can relate to that. It's been more than once a pet cat has tackled me when I felt ill, its cute, but really agitating at the same time. Good work
Tokiko
thanks for reviewing my poem :)
shadowycat
2003-12-27
ch 1, anon.
abuseOh yes, it's all about them isn't it? LOL Very well done. I hope you're feeling better now. :)
Limyaael
2003-12-27
ch 1,
abuseVery cute. My first thought on reading the summary was that you had somehow gotten the flu from your cats, but of course they can cause enormous amounts of trouble without actually handing you the disease.
Good luck in feeling better, and say hello to your cats for me!
-Limyaael.
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