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| cosmo-queen 2005-04-25 ch 1,  | abuseWhat lovely images you've been able to portray in the space of a few syllables. Clever juxtaposition too, with vagrant souls climbing in one haiku and angels gliding down in the other. Great work :) *cosmo-queen* |
| Cloud Burst 2005-04-09 ch 1, | abusesimple and beautiful, just the way i like it ^-^ |
| philoslove 2004-10-15 ch 1, | abuseThe imagery us just magnificent, and it's really creative thinking that a rainbow is a slide for angels... It really gives such a beautiful touch to those colours, especially the first stanza. Never come across a cut-haiku before. Absolutely stunning... |
| Needa S 2004-02-26 ch 1, | abuseHow could anyone not be nice to this beautiful piece! Keep up the wonderful work. |
| katmonkey 2004-02-15 ch 1, | abuseCool imagery :) *lime-girl* |
| Lidless Eye 2004-02-05 ch 1, | abuseThis was really cool. I love the imagery you put in this. It just makes it come alive. Brilliant work. ~Lidless Eye |
| Moyan 2004-02-05 ch 1, | abusesuch great imagination associated with the rainbow!! i will muse over rainbow more when next see one. |
| princessjunkie 2004-01-26 ch 1, | abuseIt's beautiful! I love the first lines of each verse. What is a cut-haiku? I haven't encountered it before. Aornis :O) P.S Reviews would be appreciated but not essential. :O) |
| Lina Inverse 2004-01-16 ch 1, | abuseThese were incredibly beautiful. I've never written a cut-haiku before, but after reading these, you're tempting me. |
| Namir Swiftpaw 2004-01-12 ch 1, | abuseThis is awesome! =) . Thank you for all your wonderful comments on my natures haikus...=) I appreciate it! . I like the image of angels using the rainbow as a slide... . Keep writing! . ~Namir Swiftpaw |
| Seras Nova 2004-01-09 ch 1, | abuseO! Yay, a new style for me to try. I love this, very calm and peaceful. Love the wording and the format for it all fits nicely. Thanks for the idea. Keep writing. -Seras |
| Mime 2004-01-08 ch 1, | abuseAw, this is so pretty! I can just see the mystical ark of colors, bathed in the Heaven's sunshine with angels flying around. Truly excellent work. |
| Porcelain Spirit 2004-01-06 ch 1, | abuseReally nice haiku! I love the imagery that it creates. That's pretty well done if it's your first cut-haiku. Review mine if you can. ^_~ |
| Dancinggal5389 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseYour words flow like a rainbow themselves. Lovely. |
| twilightwriter07 2004-01-01 ch 1, | abuseThis is a beautiful cut-haiku. I liked the part of "Sun-glided passageway arcs..." and overall, great job. ^_^ I can't wait to read more of your works. |