col!

For some reason, I like this poem : )maybe it's because I dig chocolate.

HAhaHA-HA-HA-HA! Devilish. Love the story it's told in and the evil pinprick of wisdom that blatantly poked out my eye just now. XD

... doesn't it happen to us every day, indeed. XD

::Thumbs-up.::

*blinks* Can I hava choccie, eh? *wraps pika arms around your leg* I updated, you fool, now please read the newer chapters, I'm desperate for reviews.
Ahem... I mean.. this is really good. It's like crazed genius, except, I probably misspelt genius. I like it. I think I'll save it somewhere.

#gasps for air# Sorry, but it was a bit hard to get a breath of air since you didn't put nearly any punctuation throughout the poem. If your poem had a bit mor punctuation it would have a bit more rhythem. I'm not tring to be rude, just giving you my opionion about something.

you are an awesome writer. keep writing!
jessi

(SORRY! I'VE BEEN BUSY!) um.. interesting. The way you word it is really cool. But the thoughts in it are really random. yeah. why does SOC think I have weird reviews?

this is a VERY VERY VERY strange poem but it is good! Your rhythm sounds a little funny but like i said it's good.

Chocolate is sexy

This is a FUNNY poem! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! *runs away, cackling to self* BYE THEA!! WRITE MORE!