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Reviews For: Anguish
Lady E 2005-02-19 . chapter 1
Nicely put and chock-full of emotions.
Deana Bell 2004-01-07 . chapter 1
This was also very emotional. The line "Yet it is Thee who desires a bed with me." kinda confused me though.
~God bless~
PainKiller 2004-01-05 . chapter 1
This may be one of your most powerful poems. I think your use of free-verse facilitates the feelings, giving you creative freedom to express yourself clearly. So much intensity; so much pain; it's all said and unsaid so plainly that it envelops you in one massive outpouring of feeling.
'It is I, royalty/Yet it is still I who am the furthest from a judge's mercy'
This, and the last two lines were the best. As usual, your ending was brilliant. Marvelous; simply marvelous.
Wasted Postage 2003-12-31 . chapter 1
Simply excellent.
~*~AbunaiChikara
HoldinOn2Him 2003-12-28 . chapter 1
So meaningful , really it's brilliant. Looking forward to reading more of your works.
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