this is so wise. I'll treasure it. :) Thank you.

Amazing! You always have the most wonderful messages to share. And it's always carried out beautifully.

This is really sweet. Cute almost. ^-^ I love the repition it gave it a nice touch. =) Your very talented. I hope to read more of your work. Hopefully all. ^n-n^ Take care and god bless !!

~ Noelle ~

I like this one...it is very true...God bless.
HtW

The last stanza really completed everything nicely. Great job; I can sense the emotion behind it.
~God bless~

Don't listen to the dork who first posted a review to your work... especially cause he hasn't posted anything of his own anyway. Now THAT is a jerk.
Really beautifully done; I can see why Heart put it on her favs list. Nice use of repetition throughout. 'I'd pour out all my love and care/In hopes that it would be enough' were two of the most gorgeous lines to me. You have such a passion for God that just runs rampant between the lines of all your poetry... this deep reverance that I can't explain, and very few people express that so clearly for the Father. Awesome job.

Beautiful.
It's amazing to think that everything you want to do for Him, He can do for us.
Keep up the good work--

Astounding work!
~*~AbunaiChikara

Amazing write. I loved it. Keep writing for God, what a talent you have . :D

Wow. This piece was so beautiful and incredible. It's going on my favorites list.

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