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| Carmel March 2007-07-27 ch 2,  | abuseExcellent beginning to the story. You've got a fantastic writing style, creative and refreshing at the same time. Good job on this, and I can't wait for more :) ~carm~ |
| Error-Author 2007-03-14 ch 2, | abuseVery interesting. You write like an artist would paint; colorful and bold. :) You have excellent imagery and your story is a whirl of motion even though you only have one setting so far. It does what a good story should and hooks the reader immediately, keeping their interest until there isn't anymore, and you look around, searching for more, not even having noticed you've gone through two chapters. Are you going to write more on it? I noticed you published it a few years ago. Once I've left a story I find it so hard to pick it back up, so kudos to you ^.^ Cheers! Great start :) |
| layby-cougar 2004-10-07 ch 2, | abuseOH! update soon please! Hope there's romance in this one *winks* and I wonder what's going on with the naughty guys? Humpf, cliffhangers are mean. lol I can really talk...Please post more soon! Love, Carmen |
| Eibhinn Eonach 2003-12-27 ch 1, | abuseI think darling nikki might be the name of a Prince song, too... i knew a girl named nikki, i guess you could say she was a sex fiend. Met her in a hotel lobby masturbatin with a magazine.. lol. so on and so forth, you know how those prince songs go. ^_~ Eibhinn |
| AngelaRB 2003-12-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is a gorgeous story so far. You're a terrific writer, and you write so vividly that I can effortlessly picture all of it in my head as I read. |