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| coeurdefurie 2006-08-16 ch 1,  | abuseIt's really good. The bitter-sweet ending saves it from being trite. |
| toxic-noodle725 2006-06-04 ch 1, | abuseoh wow that was beautiful. it was an amazing story though i wish it had a happier ending but im satisfied. i loved it! |
| PearlinTheMist 2005-11-04 ch 1, | abusethat was the most awe inspiring thing I've ever read. Filled with such passion and poetry, I'm not sure what to say to describe the feelings it created. Amazing, is all I can really say. I'm glad I read that. |
| Toledo 2005-09-11 ch 1, | abusenice little piece here, really nice work, with all the intricate detail nad surreal view and the sort of 'dream' backdrop...nice job! |
| Trinket90 2005-05-10 ch 1, | abuseWow. This is really beautiful, incredible. The imagery is wonderful, and I can almost taste and feel the things you describe. This is wonderful. |
| LunarRhainne 2005-04-30 ch 1, | abuseI LOVE IT! it's superb! |
| Kitsune gone insane 2005-04-28 ch 1, | abuseExcellent |
| Gloves - Daisy Hogan 2005-04-02 ch 1, | abuseGreat 1st chapter, I take it there are going to be more chapters or is this a short story thing? |
| bubblegum 2004-11-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseWOW! This was awesome! WOW! lol I have nothing else to say besides that. AWESOME! Good job with it ^_^ |
| Anywien Tir'ein 2004-11-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. I love it. Great work, I think I'll go read Brother Sun, Sister Moon. Keep it up, won't you? -Anywien |
| Makisha Korian 2004-10-19 ch 1, | abuseWow...OMG! I love this! It's so well written, and I can see the characters so perfectly. *squeals* Write more, please! |
| wing 2004-07-08 ch 1, | abuseWhoa! this story's awsome! please tell me it's going to continue! You have an awsome, deep way of writing. awsome piece! ^_^ |
| The Child of The Potted Pla... 2004-05-23 ch 1, | abuseWow, that was so well written! |
| Kim W 2004-05-13 ch 1, | abuseThat's a great story, it explains emotions clearly. |
| Hikari Shan 2004-04-20 ch 1, | abuseO! I like! Good job! Very good. *hands author a shiny gold medal* here is your reward! |