holy toledo
it's true- the worst thing anyone can do ever is kill or hurt a little old lady.
have i mentioned yet that your grammar and spelling are, for the most part, very good? and when it's not, it's mostly intentional and humorous. and when it's just a mistake, hey, i'm a forgiving goddess. despite the fact i'm an english major. you have my favor. i promise never to stike you dead for bad spelling. perhaps i may strike you severely injured if you put a "your" where a "you're" would be correct, but you'd still be able to write amusing stories.

WOW! Another geniusly written piece of wit from Simonpsyc. Bless you, laddie!

I'm interested where this is going. Continue. Kjetil is a real name? Well duh considering you said it in the summary but ya never know. I think you should continue
Iccess-america

enough of this clever/witty review **. Let me get to the point. funny, badly written, short, and as always awesome.

Sweet... Haha... Vampires smoking cigarettes. I love it. Whee!

ohh.. i like i like. I love it how you put humor and laughter in with the most brutal of creatures. Vampires. Go you, its your birthday, gona party like its ur birthday! lol.. Keep writing.