Reviews for Here there be dragons

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sheepep 2006-01-29 ch 1,	abuselike it. peace. cutie-ara.
JackRabbit 2005-06-25 ch 1, anon.	abuseO... Wow. That's really cool. Forgive me, I'm not logged on right now. I've got to send some stories in.
Moarte in Extaz 2004-06-15 ch 1,	abuseHehe! The Dragon was happy! ^_^' I loved this, it rythmed perfectly. Keep writing and never stop! eien, ~:~ Melena ~:~
Shadowz the Silver Wolf 2004-04-18 ch 1,	abusethat was just cool...is speechless (for once)
Lauren K 2004-04-03 ch 1,	abuseAhh I can imagine the scariness of messing up a spell of such magnitude. Good. The repitition of the line gave a nice flow. ~Kiara by the way, I read that fallingofftheworld is copying your "format." I'm sorry. I read an essay that was based off of one of yours, and hers was called Gay is Not Ok. I would sue.
Willow Elandria 2004-03-31 ch 1,	abuseI love the rhythm and rhyme scheme, very catchy. The rhyming doesn't sound forced at all, and it flows nicely without compromising the wonderful imagery. Interesting twist at the end. Just one thing: the line, "Commands by waves of his arms," doesn't seem to fit the rhythm of the rest of the poem... it threw me of a little when I read it the first time. Otherwise very nice. ~Willow
nightdragon0 2004-03-10 ch 1,	abuseHmm, pretty descriptive and has a nice rhyme to it too!
Laineniel 2004-02-26 ch 1,	abuseIt doesn't quite fit my image of dragons, but with such an obscure and fantastic creature, who can see them exactly the same? The last stanza was my favourite and it actually made me laugh out loud. Thanks for such a delightful poem! I also liked how the word order was different from common speaking, if that makes sense? Well, at any rate, I like it.
Gemema 2004-02-18 ch 1,	abuseWow, this was great! I love the imagery you've used, and the descriptions are wonderful. I loved the end. Made me smile. The repitition of 'the Serpent now recoils' is very effective. It kinda gives the piece a chant-like quality which really fits with summoning a dragon. Excellent job! ps - Thanks for the review! I really apreciate it, and I'm glad you liked it.
LordK 2004-02-12 ch 1,	abuseOh! That was incredible! The last stanza made an awesome ending. The use of 'the serpent now recoils' was great. This poetry is great. I loved it, and now I'm off to read more of your poetry. And thanks for the review!
Infinite Smiles 2004-01-27 ch 1,	abuseI liked it.. and i love that line...the serpent now recoils
Loki Mischeif-Maker 2004-01-19 ch 1,	abuseWow. This is a beautiful poem. I loved the imagery and the "Seprent now recoils" last line of every stanza. The whole thing has a mysterious, ancient feel to it, and its really well done. Yes, it was worth getting the line stuck in your head for days. Actually, I can't see what you were complaining about- I wish I could write a poem that is good enough to get stuck in MY head for days. Anyway, back to the point. Great poem, liked the ending- thedragon's "Midnight snack"- too.
Nathan K 2004-01-15 ch 1,	abuseQuite humorous, especialy the last part. Quite nice really...you seem like a great writer (one of your stories has 73 chapters) and I was wondering if you might review my stuff. Anyway I like this poem, and I'm not one for poetry...Splendid, Well done!
SweetGrape 2004-01-12 ch 1,	abuseMysterious, wondrous opening- gives an appropriate atmosphere. 'sting of hidden scars'- interesting line to put in there, maybe gives a reason why someone's summoning a dragon. Good thyrthm and word use, by the way- keeps the atmoshpere, slowly adding to the picture each stanza- masterfully done. 'from horrid sins'- I don't feel so bad that he's going to be eaten (your summary gave it away). Great descriptions, btw. 'The dragon liked his midnight snack' and I liked the dragon. I could probably link it logically if I tried, but 'The Serpent now recoils' doesn't automatically connect to things for me. (except in the last stanza where the dragon leaves)
Windsong 2004-01-04 ch 1,	abuse;;O_o I was ind of expecting that to happen...I mean, generally one wouldn't try to summon a dragon without some sizable force to back him up, lest he be eaten. Which is what happened, so I kind of feel that he deserved it. ;;^^ Then again, I've been described as heartless before. Anyways, I actually did not understand why you kept repeating "The serpent now recoils," which makes me feel rather silly but oh well...was it referring to the dragon he was summoning? Did it just sound cool? I don't know. On another note, thanks a bunch for reviewing my fic. ^^ It made my day, like reviews always do. One last final thing: have you ever read Flight of Dragon Kyn, from the Dragon Chronicles? "Here there be dragons" is a saying in that book, which is what caught my eye. Anyways, I'm done- Keep writing! ^^ -Windsong

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