Even though it's such an abstract poem, I know exactly how that feels... ~starlight

Well perchance u'll like this review. perchance this review isn't a view perchance its just ways to use perchance. Perchance ur poem was delightful- perchance that the prior isn't perchance at all.

Good poem. Kind of depressing, though. Depressing, but good.

*rolls the dice of life after reading your new work* Well, that was the first thing it reminded me of. I hope your luck has been better than mine =P

IM LISTENING! great poem!

unusual pattern in this one. I like it though. and now i;m inspired. Let us see if this works *clicks the submit button*

*reads very very happily* Oh pretty - *runs into something* Ouch.
That "even" in the last line messes up the rhythm. Other than that...that's pretty. Very pretty. Not at all overdone, all questioning...and I really love "Perchance I've stolen away your chance/And I'm not giving it back" and "Right time right moment right space right place"...yeah. Really classy stuffs here.

I'm the first to revoo this very nifty poem. I loved it, seriously. The language was phenomenal. When else do you get to hear the word "perchance"?
Much love,
Megs