wicked poem. very pretty (if that can be said of a poem).

I am thinking of fairies.

beautiful. so short but mesmerizing.

Ur poem is dumb u stuip retard. There's still one more spot in the mentel hopstil for u! u better call them soon. Here's the number 1-800-I-Cant-write-poems-and-im-retard

hey violets,
i'm desperate to find a really long poem that shadows this one. a sense of fantisy and mythology and freedom. was wondering do you have a really long one of yours i could check out. i'm so addicted i love this, and i might give it a shot, but i'd rather it'd be by you.
Help?
Jasmine

I'm a little confused by the "of" and "stars" you put off to the side... It makes sense if you put the "of stars" at the end... It's really beautiful. Interesting how you said "let the skin fall from your shoulders" ...that normally sounds so morbid, but it sounds rejuvinating (sp?) here

Incredible. words cannot describe the beauty of this simple, yet awesome poem. You rock my face clean off.
write on!!

This was very pretty. The way it was formatted was quite interesting too. ^.^

Thank YOU for mentioning me in your profile ^_^ I'm flattered ^_^
This piece, is completely original, unforced (no way!!) and exquisite. It created a really gorgeous picture in my mind of 2 souls in the moonlight...beautiful.

beautiful, in an odd way.

That's really cool. I like this one!

I read it so many times. I'm glad I can finally grasp a solid meaning of my own. I'd rather say, evanescent, for that is the effect that poem had on me- purity of the soul in a somehow fantasy(no, spiritual- wait, magick?) setting. I'm startled at (appropriate word?) how you are able to fulfill requests with such high level of ... success!

I liked this... It has a calming essence to it. Great job!
~Lidless Eye

OOh...this is really unforced prettiness, as you said. It's beautiful. I love the format of it.

magpie: ahh! sorry, just had to say it--that scene in Dawn Treader was totally the inspiration for this!! eep!
*has successfully conveyed a meaning...finally...yes!*
~lyv