Wow. deep. I like that you ask Him to speak to you clearly, becuase a mortal mind needs that. I also get the feeling that it'f because the world is just so full of lies and mistrust, you need someone to talk to you and tell you what you need to hear in words you can understand. great job.
God Bless

WOW! this is my favorite so far that I have read of yours. I like the style of this one alot. I love how you openly share you are a Christian...how you are not ashamed of what God has done in your life, and knowing how he is always there gives me comfort too. Very good job.

Good work. I like the conversational, refreshingly original tone (especially in the brackets). The ending is very effective. Those last two lines are so suggestive without being too explicit, and for someone who can relate to this prayer (such as me ;-) ) they evoke a whole range of emotions. Really well done.
I'll have a look at your other writings as soon as I'll find time.
~ Eirien

I ca really feel those same feelings taht you are expressing i this poem as I have also felt that way many times. I really like this poem good job. And completely off topic, we've reveiwed each other before so here I go. I'm 15 and I'm a Christian. I live in Victoria and if I already know you I would laugh really hard, but I don't think I do know you. My favorite bands are Jars of Clay, DC Talk and Out of Eden. I go to Victoria Pacific Rim Alliance Church... my email is singing_elfchild@hotmail.com

Amen.