This poem chilled me, and i'm not sure why, but I like it anyway. It's really nice, and flows smoothly. Good job.

Your stuff is cool...now I wanna see happy poems coz you're a great person & i want you to see that yourself!

wow. i like how you included different pov's, and it really reminded me of a quote i know, "maybe this world is really just the hell of another" sorry, i cant remember who said that. all and all, good job.
-janE

very interesting way of looking at it. good poem, possibly more of a song, with the repetition of the divine question. i've never looked at it that way... good poem

Nice poem. It was an interesting way to look at life. Good work, and keep writing.

Yea, really true.
btw, my story you reviewed; Dreams That Kill, it has been updated. :D

Interesting philosophy, but then sometimes I really have to agree.