I love the title (and the song!).
Ah, I have a story idea that I want to send into motion, but I can't! I need to write it down before I forget.
...What was I talking about? O.o _ Kidding. Anyway, off to your story...
A guitar? Hey, I have one of those! Too bad I can't really play anything except a weird Western tune. -_-;;
*Sings along to "November Rain"*
Aw, that poor dear. Your description of the landscape is beautiful and mature. I love it.
Aw-w-w-w. How sad and enthralling. ;_;
I love the end. Heck, this whole story.

Oh MY GOSH, Silver this is amazing! The imagery, teh one wrong choice, the pain, the suffering, and all of it is awesome! I love the way you have Leona portrayed with her one wrong choice and teh consequences! I can't wait to find out what happens, I love all this angel stuff and the song fit amazingly into the story! TTYS
Ici

Aw! Leona doesnt deserve the suffering brought upon her...she deserves happiness. I hope that someday she gets it
Pyra