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Papillon Sierra 2004-03-06 . chapter 12
yay i'm so excited!
Brightflower 2004-03-01 . chapter 11
Wow, that was so...awesome! Is this the end? Somehow I still don't get it. So...Preston wasn't real, then...? That was so sad. I can't believe they had to lock Anna away. This was such a sad tale, really...so emotional. I practically cried. You did a superb job in writing this. It was amazing.
Kymik 2004-02-27 . chapter 11
Is this the end of your story? wow, I think this was my favourite chapter so far. I really liked how you focused on Preston's eyes. They have a very real and yet unreal quality to them, just like Anna's world. I disagree with some of your reviewers though... it wouldn't have been right for Anna to keep talking with Preston and Elle. They aren't real and even if it wasn't hurting anyone then, schizophrenia can progress to the point where it does become a serious serious problem (Dr. Carter getting stabbed on ER, anyone... hello?). As far as I can tell, Anna was already in way over her head.
Anyways, good job. Cheers :)
wendy chism 2004-02-26 . chapter 11
woah...that was totally mind blowing...you have an awsome talent for writing...things were descriptive yet mysterious, things were clear yet soo confusing...and things were so happy and then they were drastically aware...thanx so much for writing this story, you gave me something to think about
Papillon Sierra 2004-02-26 . chapter 11
oh no he left! that's so sad! come back preston!
Papillon Sierra 2004-02-26 . chapter 10
i hope they don't take preston away from her! he seems too real
Kymik 2004-02-26 . chapter 10
coolness. Great chapter. It must be very hard for Anna. Schizophrenia is a very misunderstood disease, it will be intersting to see how the story goes now that it is all out in the open.
cheers :)
wendy chism 2004-02-25 . chapter 10
hmm ok i didnt really understand this chapter...soo plz update soon so that i can get it better =)
wendy chism 2004-02-24 . chapter 9
i really really love the way you've developed your characters...gosh its so secretive...it makes the reader feel like they know something preston doesnt, breaking the 3rd wall that blocks a reader from attaching themselves to the story...plz update soon, i gotta kno what happens! but plz dont send her away
Papillon Sierra 2004-02-22 . chapter 9
i still love this story... you're a great writer!
Not so Average 2004-02-21 . chapter 4
This is slightly confusing, but I really like it. It's amazing how talented you are. Is Preston real. though? I can't figure it out.
Brightflower 2004-02-11 . chapter 8
sorry i haven't reviewed in a while. =) It was going so well for Anna, and now they're sending her away? That just isn't fair. Why should she be forced to "give up" the people that make her happy? Honestly, people like Hilda can be so ignorant. It's not like Anna's imaginary friends are hurting anyone. Not even Anna.
I hope you keep updating, because I really like this story. Preston was really nice in this latest chapter. I wonder if he really likes Anna? You know, really likes. I hope all goes well for her!
Kymik 2004-02-09 . chapter 8
I liked Preston in this chapter, I can see why it would be hard for Anna to let go.
Good job :)
Papillon Sierra 2004-02-08 . chapter 7
hmm... i can't wait to see what happens!
FAKE?romances 2004-02-06 . chapter 5
wow.
this story is really...powerful. :)i love how you've developed the personalities of them all...geez, hilda ANNOYS me.
great story! keep going :)
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