That is great. I'm trying to think of something else to say but 'great' is the only word that will work. Argh. I can't even find any constructive critism to add in, sorry. LOL Its that good.
-The Sinister Raven

wow... unexpected ending there... although you capture childhood perfectly... great poem!

*nods* I really have to say I like this one. It's got a good beat to it, and you capture your emotions so perfectly. Good job.
~Lil Lalita

that is different but strangly haunting at the same time. i like :)