I like the characters, they seem to have a life of their own that would carry them of the page. I would be careful to not sterotype (if thats the right word) charcters and make sure they continue to be two dimensional. I think you can definatly tell when you stopped and then started writing again. It works, but only just, I think you would either need to remincise or do "flashbacks" (which don't always work in writing) as the reader will want to know more about your relationship with Cecilla. But I did like the use of humor! Especially the "turning up late to class" look (having been on the recieving end of a few!) and the "give birth to my children: voice. Both very amusing. Overall, I enjoyed it and am looking forward to your next chapter!

First things first; Shannon Noll should have won Aus Idol, not Guy. lol. Secondly, I like the direction you're taking this story in. I like it alot so far. It's good to read a 'romance' from a guys perspective. Anyway, I hope you right more soon. I'll be looking out for an update!

I'm so sorry! The first review I tried to leave for this chapter was lost because of an error, and then I didn't have time to leave another one. But I like this chapter. You've characterized Tonya excellently. Girls like that do not command any respect at all. Pia the Second's character is good too. Keep that aspect up! It's what's making this story excellent. And I love Cecilia. ~Chloe

Wow, more girls all the time. For someone who likes girls a lot, Reese sure doesn't know how to connect with one when he first sees one. It's good that they like te same music, though. That's a good ice-breaker. And Cecilia is a really pretty name. It suits her character. ~Chloe

I love the names you pick out for these chicks (Belinda, Bianca, Pia, Cecilia). Very Unique and interesting.
Phoebe

im liking this story :) keep writing

hey I've only read the first chapter so far but I love this story. It's made me laugh too :)
You live in Adelaide too or are you just picking a random place? I wonder if you hate this place as much as me :)
anyway, great story so far. I will review again once I've read the other chapters

Poor Reese. He goes through a lot to do what he wants. And believe me, if one of my best friends had a boyfriend like Vince, I'd be ** too. And you are so right about girls! They think guys don't understand...and some don't. I can understand where Reese is coming from because my younger brother is the only boy child in our family and his best friend is a girl. So yeah. This was a good chapter, but not the way the first two were. Update soon! ~Chloe

I'm really enjoying reading your story and look forward to the upcoming chapters.
Peace:
PHEBES

You know what...I think Reese likes Pia secretly. He just doesn't know it yet.
You sounded like you really knew what you were talking about in this chapter. This is a very good thing. The inner feelings Reese has in this chapter are very well written. So good job. ~Chloe

I think the 'guys talking about love are **' things should be dropped. that's SOO dumb.

Hehe. Dirk kind of reminds me of me, I'm stupid like that. I've turned in a blank sheet of paper before...that didn't go over well. And my ** is non-existant ^_^
anyways, this seems interesting so far, and I'll leave a review for chp2.

This is nice. I really feel like I got to know Reese in this chapter. His friends are pretty interesting too. These stories are always great because they give you an inside view of the character's thoughts. I like it and I hope you update soon. ~Chloe

Yikes, this IS well written and all but you really, really need to seperate your paragraphs. It took me a while to read this becuase it was so hard to tell one line from another. Beside that, you have a good start here and I want to read more. :)