Ooh, very nice. *claps* Oftentimes this rhyme scheme can be boring or people write in words that don't fit to make them rhyme, but you commited neither of those crimes. Very insightful.

Anita

that's pretty cool.i read your bio,and i like it.to be an outcast,to me,is a little overrated though.but hey if it works for you then it works in general right?
~Sam

wow, cool!
Frieza: TIA!
Vicky: *rolls eyes* Yes, Frieza, it's Octavia. I think...? Sounds just like her, anyway.
Cool poem, I like it!
Frieza: *concerned* Does Tia still feel that way...?
Vicky: Why don't you ask her? Shush! I'm reviewing!
Frieza: -_-
Okay, I gotta go read Morality now - yay! You updated that! ^_^

wow, i loved that poem, reminded me alot like my character in queen of the damned..hehe...lovey-loved it!

Tragicness..
The poor girl; I'm glad she finally realized that what she was doing was wrong, though. Even if it didn't do her much good. You've got quite a talent here; it's awesome.