That was good! Depressing, but good. I found out about you poetry from ff.net. I read a review that you wrote, thought it was funny, read your bio and then read your poetry. I could never write anything like this. I have inspiration, but no poetry writing skills. Rock on!

I can really relate to this topic. You conveyed the feelings so well, I almost thought it was me thinking there. Interesting form, by the way.
~Lil Lalita