This really accurately describes growing up. Great poem! Thanks for reviewing me and yes, "life flows freely" does refer to blood flowing...

Wow, this is really true and honest, and definitely sums up leaving childhood behind :) Well done.

this is reli gd, i love the childlike images u hav created, and it shows clearly the realisation that we have to grow up.
Keep writing!
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Pretty cool. I like it. I would say, keep up the great work, but with 67 poems I think you've done pretty well already. :-) Keep it going though!
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o very true its great i love the stanzas about childhood they are so true... & the ending is so sad... awesome poem

thats kinda sad...I like it, especially the part about the bird song, and the stars (i like depressing stuff :) so long as its not too depresesing) please R&R some of my stuff. thanx