|Reviews for No Longer My World|
| Terrafauna 1/7/05 . chapter 1
This really accurately describes growing up. Great poem! Thanks for reviewing me and yes, "life flows freely" does refer to blood flowing...
| thenewromantic 12/30/04 . chapter 1
Wow, this is really true and honest, and definitely sums up leaving childhood behind :) Well done.
| Nerf 1/15/04 . chapter 1
this is reli gd, i love the childlike images u hav created, and it shows clearly the realisation that we have to grow up.
| QueenRemge13 1/1/04 . chapter 1
Pretty cool. I like it. I would say, keep up the great work, but with 67 poems I think you've done pretty well already. :-) Keep it going though!
| simpleplan13 12/29/03 . chapter 1
o very true its great i love the stanzas about childhood they are so true... & the ending is so sad... awesome poem
| TwyliteRose 12/29/03 . chapter 1
thats kinda sad...I like it, especially the part about the bird song, and the stars (i like depressing stuff :) so long as its not too depresesing) please R&R some of my stuff. thanx