Hello again. So. I liked it. Is this the final one in the series? I love Daemir and in the end I was happy that he ended up with Caliarus. He seemed to care for him much more than Talan did. Although I do feel bad for what happened there. I know Talan was awful to Dae about what had happened but he thought he had went back on his word and didn't love him. I didn't like that about this story. I know he didn't let him explain but he was angry and upset. But then again, he'd have fought harder for Dae if he really did love him, I guess.

Not exactly what I quite expected at the end, alas, brilliant!

Thank you for pleasuring us the readers.

I feel sorry for Talan, because he lost Daemir. But I don'y because he didn't care for him.
Daemir on the other hand, I'm glad he got a happy ending.

Nice twist to give the 'evil' character someone to love.

Finally, a well written story. I really liked them both.

So this is the end of the series? There isn't any more sequals left?

I'm wondering about the prophecy ... there wasn't massive bloodshed and the story did not say that Tal'larie became free from their keepers...?

So what happens to the rest of the world while Daemir chased after Caliarus? Will there be more~? I really really hope there will be, a sequal centered about Daemir and Caliarus's relationship and clear up things with Talan... There wasn't anything on how Talan thought through all this. He should be made to suffer that he was so fickle and so mean to Daemir.

KYA Cali sounds so HOT! I think Daemir and Caliarus is the perfect couple, my favourite out of all your stories that I have read so far I believe~ (I think I have read more than half of everything, maybe even close to reading everything already, I don't remember what I've read and what I haven't XD Some of the stories I'm reading twice already)

I adore this couple!!

I just finished reading your Faery Prince series and sequels and since I didn't really want to stop and comment after each story I will do so in this one for all of them.

The Faery Prince Review: Overall your story was good and entertaining to read. Though it did have a few mistakes, like how the characters didn't really develop and some became completely out of character. Though the way you wrote the story was very nice, your writing style is really good. Not only that but your plot, though rushed and incomplete at sometime, was very creative and done very smoothly.

The Demon Servant Review: Once again this story was great like the one before, and like the one before it held the same mistakes as the other. Some of the characters seemed out of character and sometime the story would be rushed. Though this one was just as fun to read and awakened my interest even more.

The Moon Twins Review: Well this story left me feeling quite confused. I was all over the place with emotions it provoked from me. Like I was so angry with Talan, he didn't even give it a second thought to question to just marry someone else. Still I loved reading it though I hate the stupidity of Talan. I also liked the main focus of the story, I am glad Lyssa got his happy ending. The story was also written better than the previews ones since the characters seemed to stay in character more often and the plot was really rushed often.

Shadow Jewel Review: What can I say about this other than I love and hated the ending. I am so glad that in the end that Daemir was happy because he deserved it, but I felt that the ending left something unconcluded. One of them being how Talan and Resc reacted, who were being completely **, reacted when they found of what happened to Daemir, if they found out at all. The epilogue gave some understanding that Daemir did keep in touch with Vil but it didn't say anything about his other relationships, like Lyssa. Though this isn't really relevant I kind of also wondered if Risha ever got found out, though he probably didn't. I totally believe someone was arrogant and bastardy like Talan deserves to be married to a deceiving greedy idiot like Risha, but there would be no point if he didn't know what kind of person he had married. But anyways, though the ending gave me more to wonder than closure, I stilled love the story and Cali and Daemir being together. This story was written very well, the was only one place that I can think in which the story was rushed, and none of the characters seemed out of place, they just seemed like they had developed.

As a whole review: I loved the series despite the inconclusive ending. I am also split on whether I am glad it ended there or if it would have been nice to know what happened after Daemir talked to Vil in the town. Like how Daemir and Cali got together and stuff like that. Also as I read further into the series I "witness" how your writing mature and got better story to story, it was cool to see. Oh and I just remembered you mentioned somewhere that you would like your long stories to be longer or something like that, but I tell you not to worry because your stories may not be 20 or 30 chapter stories, they are just as entertaining and good. That and the fact that if you add all the sequels to the original you end up with a very long story. Anyways, to finish this ridiculously long review I want to say that I can't wait to read some more of you works.

uh what happened to Daemir's foster parents who were Kirash's brothers?

*sobs* damn angels... stories where the angels are the bad guys are confusing...

*sobs* AH! WAH!*makes a slobbery mess*

NOO!! Learn the powers! learn the powers! To kill the stupid little blond faery! Sorry, there's really lot's of love here!

I almost cried, cuz it's sad that Talan gets married to that priss.

So I loved all four installments and I thought that you might like to hear that as a writer. It is obvious that you put a lot of time into this story and it was wonderful. Now that we have established that I did in fact love it, a few points of criticism shouldn't be too hard to take. I think that the characters as a cast were a tad too moody to be believable and people fell in love to quickly. With the last two stories, I loved that it showed the duality of love vs. infatuation. I think that it was fantastic that it wasn't a clear cut good guys and bad guys as well. Overall I would say that it was amazingly well written and that I loved it.

I read all of your stories: "The Faery Prince", "The Demon Servant", "The Moon Twins", "Shadow Jewel".
I like the first two stories, "The Faery Prince" and "The Demon Servant". I, however, am not sure about "The Moon Twins" and "Shadow Jewel". I like the last two stories, but I would like for that Prince Talan to know the truth behind Daemir's kidnapping and Risha's part behind this! Still, there's nothing I can do since I like Caliarus, too.
Oh well...

I smell heartbreak.
I see...
*creepy fog and other prophecy junk*
Day will return to his boy-toy, too bad, boy-toy moved on.
Insert angst.
Day will then turn to the mage for comfort.
Insert more angst.
Mage gives in after awhile.
Aw, true love.
Do angsty polka.

...
Damn.
Now I don't know who I'm rooting for, though I have a suspicion...
*sigh*
Take your stupid cookies...