beautiful, wonderfully written, as always. thanks for finding the words to describe how i feel right now, only change the girl to a boy, lol.

=) I really liked that poem... I've been reading a lot of poetry on here lately... Just between you and me, I get alittle discouraged I can't find one that impresses me... DOn't get me wrong, I've read a lot of good poetry (the ones i review), but this is a very very good piece! I like it! It was very clear and very nice rythm. Keep it up!