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Reviews For: Trite

TwystedFate
2005-05-08
ch 1,
abuseThat was sheerly amazing. Bravo.
rocket baby doll
2004-12-05
ch 1,
abusegod, this is amazing... aHmazing, i love the line in your summary, but this is seriously full of some memorable lines... god. amazing. its insane how oddly relevent everything i'm reading today seems to be, i have never been able to relate so well. especially the line about bad poetry...:P
Jadah Krayne
2004-10-08
ch 1,
abuseI remember you letting me read this one, but I got around to reviewing it. You know that I liked this one, and I thought that you did well with the rhyming. Loved it, loved it.
No Longer Posting Here
2004-06-05
ch 1,
abuseThat was a lovely and heartfelt poem. I love it.
Mackenzie Anderson
2004-05-04
ch 1,
abuseDear gods... every line is packed with emotion. It feels like a punch to the stomach... though not in a bad way. Very forceful, and you get your point across perfectly. The rhymes flowed so well. Amazing.
SoulSister
2004-03-18
ch 1,
abusethat was an incredible poem. there's so much I want to say but I'm at a loss for words. I'll just have to settle for saying that it got to me, in a good way.
sos
2003-12-30
ch 1,
abuse*stunned silence*
Ending cuts like a knife blade.
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