you do alot of poems off of songs huh?

i like that a lot.. and Numb by linkin park is one of my fav songs ever
JLO

Great poem (Music freak too! linkin park ROX)!

good poem very understandable...thanks for reviewing! Hope to read more from you soon.

It's good. Very emotional. I like your work. I wanna try reviewing all your stuff. It'll take awhile, but hell, I'll try. lol. Nice work.
Tokiko

This was really good. okay okay... I suck at reviewing...I'm sorry. But I'm still gonna tell you, it was really good... I said that already didn't I?...crap...

Very good.
And I love the actual song, so that's a plus.

good 2 see ya back! yah, LP ROKX! well, ur poems r good no matter wat u say! so yah, im stubborn so, fa la la. well, just sayin' i like ur poems and ur not da only one with grammar problems (by the way, i never see any grammar mistakes in ur poems). ja.

Thats pretty good. Never had it happen,but still. I like it. Maybe you can put some more of how you feel in it, more than the numbness. Keep writing!

Aww that's sad. I wish the relationship could work out...

Awe you're so cute; the poem content! .(I mean that in the best possible way)
I especially like the stanza,
"Honestly,
I was surprised
When you came back
And apologized
I didn't expect that" (LegendaryPunk29,9-13)

Does fit nicely, I enjoyed it but change "Are keeps haunting me" this is in refernce to words... it should be Words are haunting or Words keep haunting (sorry im just very picky about grammar..)

hmm really nice not what i would of done with the title but you meant it for the fact of the not being able to feel
I like it even tho it could use some tweaking
and lol i have to add this Linkin Park Rules!
The Shadow

I like this a lot.. Plus the title really did me in from the beginning- Linkin Park music is my god... i like the poem .. very thought- provoking

o definately on of your best... i havent heard the linkin park song
I love the first stanza
Awesome poem