 breezy nostrils 2005-01-31 . chapter 1Wow...I have read your stuff in a long time, and you're on my favourites author list...oh the irony. Could you please read some of my stuff too? |
 Kalyra Shadowdancer 2004-02-25 . chapter 1beautiful poem.. i could just picture it with the imagery you used..and he emotions come through very clearly as well. amazing job. keep writing :)
~KS |
 Ayanlu 2004-01-11 . chapter 1O. Nice. I like. And whenever I like something...well...I'm picky we'll put it that way. :D great job, keep it up. |
 Angele Raye 2003-12-31 . chapter 1You´re okay, aren´t you dear? Just checking up on it. I know I´m pretty much over everything, because usually such a well written depressing poem would have gotten to me a lot more. I´m just like that I suppose. And it´s wonderful, even if I´m not in tears. :) |
 Starlight Maiden 2003-12-31 . chapter 1Hey..I came to read it again...I like the last stanza. Kicks arse. ARSE. Muwhahahahahaha. |
 _Athena_Sparrow_ 2003-12-30 . chapter 1 This poem almost made me cry,no wonder it is called tears! |