 Saeger 2004-01-28 . chapter 1This is great! I love the way you set it up, adn the way you presented the characters, and... EVERYTHING!
But...
Tamahome? TAMAHOME? FushigiYugi? Bored, were we? I like the character- yours, not FYs- but I find it funny.
I like the prince, but only because he seems like a psycho crazy lunatic, who happens to be rich adn (probably) a Bishi. I like Yuki (another one... oi...) too. H esounds cool. He's definitely my fave so far.
Keep this going! I want another chapter (hopfully not as long) ASAP!
Please. |